Graded Pair Assessment

Yesterday, I received the result for my graded pair presentation. I got 8.7, which is good! However, I need to improve my language accuracy and try to prevent sloppy mistakes, such as 'company who', but it should be 'company which' and 'take that in account', should be 'take that into account'.

Responses from my colleagues weren't that bad. Some of them thought I need to have more eye contact to the audience and some of them suggested me to small grammatical mistakes. To be honest, I actually know what I went wrong, but most of the time, I just say it straight away. So I don't take my time and try to think more of what I want to say. That's why most of the time, if I'm trying to explain something, I would explain it in a more complicated way.